tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post2502067851899198417..comments2023-09-27T04:43:42.272-05:00Comments on KjM - on the web: From the sea they cameKjMhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17691028465137798738noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-24619506712149758682015-05-20T08:34:14.626-05:002015-05-20T08:34:14.626-05:00Many thanks, Icy. Glad you enjoyed it.Many thanks, Icy. Glad you enjoyed it.KjMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17691028465137798738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-74776321383737046742015-05-18T08:57:56.456-05:002015-05-18T08:57:56.456-05:00Aw, this was a beautiful story!Aw, this was a beautiful story!Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-38244041476657318692015-05-12T09:05:56.789-05:002015-05-12T09:05:56.789-05:00I am not so sure happiness is part of the picture ...I am not so sure happiness is part of the picture with this guy and his people. His Mom seemed a little fatalistic, and people turn their lights off as he passes their homes. There's gotta be a reason for that.<br /><br />Many thanks for reading and for your comment. Always appreciated.KjMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17691028465137798738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-24963918625027223162015-05-12T09:03:24.529-05:002015-05-12T09:03:24.529-05:00Merfolk? There was something of that in my mind as...Merfolk? There was something of that in my mind as this story took form, Joanne. But I thought to leave it unwritten. There are many legends and stories. The reader and this story can intersect where they need to.<br /><br />Thank you for reading.KjMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17691028465137798738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-88123318353913556412015-05-12T09:00:07.143-05:002015-05-12T09:00:07.143-05:00Thanks for the comment, Katherine. I'm glad th...Thanks for the comment, Katherine. I'm glad the nuances made it from my head to the 'page'. It doesn't always happen. Glad you enjoyed the story.KjMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17691028465137798738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-73616947391167991082015-05-12T08:59:10.706-05:002015-05-12T08:59:10.706-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.KjMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17691028465137798738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-39563712334027975582015-05-11T13:59:02.578-05:002015-05-11T13:59:02.578-05:00Evocative and mysterious. Leaves me wondering whet...Evocative and mysterious. Leaves me wondering whether the characters are of the merfolk. Enchanting.Joanne Tenenbaumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13002156649808180166noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-54718772847516144802015-05-11T08:44:04.178-05:002015-05-11T08:44:04.178-05:00Now this is why flash fiction can be so effective ...Now this is why flash fiction can be so effective -- the layers and nuances are packed in here like a poem, but with the readability and logic that prose affords. Wonderful stuff.Katherine Hajerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08270232675026751342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-75995125541738906552015-05-10T15:30:55.584-05:002015-05-10T15:30:55.584-05:00Bet they are happy to see him!Bet they are happy to see him!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-47853855852803174372015-05-09T12:13:04.770-05:002015-05-09T12:13:04.770-05:00I was aiming for that, Tim. Glad the atmosphere ma...I was aiming for that, Tim. Glad the atmosphere made it to the page.KjMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17691028465137798738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-17696124531675604892015-05-09T12:12:26.314-05:002015-05-09T12:12:26.314-05:00Worth the 2nd read? Thank you for the "beauti...Worth the 2nd read? Thank you for the "beautifully written," Helen.KjMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17691028465137798738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-34943998716983232882015-05-09T09:41:01.866-05:002015-05-09T09:41:01.866-05:00Very atmospheric piece. Nice work.Very atmospheric piece. Nice work.Tim VanSant Writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-40307921875557995932015-05-09T00:57:33.568-05:002015-05-09T00:57:33.568-05:00I read this piece twice Kevin - beautifully writte...I read this piece twice Kevin - beautifully written. Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-41266992112962705712015-05-09T00:49:55.319-05:002015-05-09T00:49:55.319-05:00Thanks Larry. Glad you enjoyed it.Thanks Larry. Glad you enjoyed it.KjMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17691028465137798738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-85325607982737074912015-05-08T21:48:53.395-05:002015-05-08T21:48:53.395-05:00Ah, the circle will be unbroken. Nice atmosphere i...Ah, the circle will be unbroken. Nice atmosphere in this piece, along with the twist at the end…Larry Kollarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.com