tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post5450140583015692402..comments2023-09-27T04:43:42.272-05:00Comments on KjM - on the web: A Long Time ComingKjMhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17691028465137798738noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-27789293373343284602010-03-18T06:10:36.015-05:002010-03-18T06:10:36.015-05:00Nice job on the suspense here, and the ending was ...Nice job on the suspense here, and the ending was just right.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-30994565318820930812010-03-16T10:37:58.484-05:002010-03-16T10:37:58.484-05:00Many thanks for the comments, folks. I really appr...Many thanks for the comments, folks. I really appreciate them. <br /><br />I agree, I believe the researcher died happy and I am glad there was a good sense of suspense through the story.<br /><br />"Cryptic and ambiguous" - I like that!KjMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17691028465137798738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-13169376639156076052010-03-16T07:10:50.893-05:002010-03-16T07:10:50.893-05:00Lovely story. Beautifully written. Thanks for a jo...Lovely story. Beautifully written. Thanks for a job well done, Kevin, and don't worry about the half-a-meal thing... half a meal is always better than the alternative.Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-44253348969833076482010-03-15T11:27:03.497-05:002010-03-15T11:27:03.497-05:00I like this very much, the suspense and the horror...I like this very much, the suspense and the horror element worked very well.<br /><br />Like Laura, I think she must have died happy!mazzz_in_Leedshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01498100483681096442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-42252038295413093982010-03-13T19:17:36.266-06:002010-03-13T19:17:36.266-06:00I love the suspense here Kevin! Up until "pub...I love the suspense here Kevin! Up until "published works" I could've sworn you'd been spying on me. :)<br />Great work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-42622027868007804442010-03-13T14:58:39.721-06:002010-03-13T14:58:39.721-06:00I thought this stood alone quite well. It was very...I thought this stood alone quite well. It was very cryptic and ambiguous, which worked. The horror and fantasy overtones worked well.Jaredhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08595239436806331106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-45596989727864246242010-03-13T11:11:11.976-06:002010-03-13T11:11:11.976-06:00Thank you Laura. Glad you enjoyed it.
It strikes ...Thank you Laura. Glad you enjoyed it.<br /><br />It strikes me that this may not stand alone as well as it might. It is something of a continuation, or re-visit at least, of <a href="http://kjmackey.blogspot.com/2009/12/careful-what-you-seek.html" rel="nofollow">Careful what you seek</a>.<br /><br />For those who may not have seen/read the earlier piece, my apologies for serving but half the meal.KjMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17691028465137798738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-88142999358209054632010-03-13T06:45:52.711-06:002010-03-13T06:45:52.711-06:00Hmm...there is triumph here and a life well spent....Hmm...there is triumph here and a life well spent. She didn't find the answer and yet her pursuits granted her final wish. What more could one ask for? Excellent, Kevin!Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.com