tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post7474857319649837703..comments2023-09-27T04:43:42.272-05:00Comments on KjM - on the web: On reflection...KjMhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17691028465137798738noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-8399826595381828522009-07-21T06:36:58.000-05:002009-07-21T06:36:58.000-05:00It was just a dream. Wasn't it? Wasn't it?...It was just a dream. Wasn't it? Wasn't it? It was. It has to be.<br>Jeff Poseyhttp://anasazistories.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-39755080196921496162009-07-21T06:34:54.000-05:002009-07-21T06:34:54.000-05:00Ach! Not a work dream! Please, not a work dream. O...Ach! Not a work dream! Please, not a work dream. Oh, you've done it now. A work dream. Okay. I'll get hold of myself. God, I hate work dreams. It's not enough they get us for most of our daylight hours. No, they have to reach into our dreams and follow us around and make us feel so guilty we get up early, saturated in the biochemical remnants of alcohol, and dash off to make them look good. Okay, okay. I can deal with that. Just, thank God, it was only a dream.<br>Jeff Poseyhttp://anasazistories.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-52005798494854852692009-07-20T17:33:59.000-05:002009-07-20T17:33:59.000-05:00Sorry about the comments not working - don't k...Sorry about the comments not working - don't know why they don't. What's the symptom?<br>Glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for working around the system to leave a comment.<br>KjMhttp://kevin.mackey.name/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-89939370592782938012009-07-20T15:38:59.000-05:002009-07-20T15:38:59.000-05:00(Comments wouldn't work for me either)Nice! Ag...(Comments wouldn't work for me either)<br>Nice! Agree with everyone on the creepiness, especially the idea of the reflection crawling into bed with Andrea. The ending's great, although I'm undecided what would happen if you tagged one or two more sentences to the end to maybe have Andrea unwittingly acknowledge the other...? Could work, but then again it ain't broken.<br>Bradfordhttp://www.fridayfiction.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-74152280010752657372009-07-20T07:29:26.000-05:002009-07-20T07:29:26.000-05:00Creepy? They're telling me I write creepy stor...Creepy? They're telling me I write creepy stories! Well now, another feather in my cap :)<br>KjMhttp://kevin.mackey.name/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-34460397808365316862009-07-20T04:34:46.000-05:002009-07-20T04:34:46.000-05:00Very creepy ending. Loved the imagery of him chase...Very creepy ending. Loved the imagery of him chased down the street by his reflections. Imaginative stuff.<br>danpowellhttp://danpowellfiction.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-20273015307719328282009-07-20T02:59:16.000-05:002009-07-20T02:59:16.000-05:00That creeped me out! I loved it.Many apologies for...That creeped me out! I loved it.<br>Many apologies for being late :-)<br>~2<br>2marahttp://www.2mara.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-49343378635791560312009-07-18T17:22:02.000-05:002009-07-18T17:22:02.000-05:00Glad you liked it folks - yes, freaky is good. I c...Glad you liked it folks - yes, freaky is good. I couldn't leave it as just a dream, life's too untidy for that. And I like the thought that there layers beneath the surface - always there, but unnoticed by us much of the time.<br>And then, when we do notice...<br>KjMhttp://kevin.mackey.name/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-53444779226007093632009-07-18T14:43:56.000-05:002009-07-18T14:43:56.000-05:00I finally got around to reading your story, and I ...I finally got around to reading your story, and I just have to say: Wow, what a cool ride! Nice double twist at the end. Well done.<br>Stephen Bookhttp://powderburnsandbullets.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-66386974897830382012009-07-18T10:21:50.000-05:002009-07-18T10:21:50.000-05:00For some reason I can't leave a comment, so I&...For some reason I can't leave a comment, so I'm trying to outsmart the system by hitching a ride on Larua's comment. Hope it works.<br>I was thinking the DTs on steroids. Was a little disappointed when it was only a dream, then laughed out loud when it turned out it wasn't - not really. Good double twist there at the end.<br>~jon<br>J. M. Strotherhttp://jmstrother.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-65415964527955679232009-07-18T06:31:50.000-05:002009-07-18T06:31:50.000-05:00Freaky little story. I liked.Freaky little story. I liked.<br>Chris Chartrandhttp://www.thedarkeagle.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-26760847214761632672009-07-18T05:10:54.000-05:002009-07-18T05:10:54.000-05:00I loved 'look at you, running from yourself...I loved 'look at you, running from yourself' - a superb line in a superb piece. I agree with Laura about mirrors.<br>Pippahttp://battypip.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-65049045600173265592009-07-17T12:25:21.000-05:002009-07-17T12:25:21.000-05:00Love it! I think mirrors are spooky anyway...after...Love it! I think mirrors are spooky anyway...after reading this I'll always be looking over my shoulder.<br>Laura Enohttp://lauraeno.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-22177586887979976122009-07-17T11:46:49.000-05:002009-07-17T11:46:49.000-05:00Shivers! Good work, my friend. Love it!Shivers! Good work, my friend. Love it!<br>Jenhttp://www.jentropy.comnoreply@blogger.com