tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post8089782655101899224..comments2023-09-27T04:43:42.272-05:00Comments on KjM - on the web: Breaking DayKjMhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17691028465137798738noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-38881583173368389332009-08-12T01:35:37.000-05:002009-08-12T01:35:37.000-05:00@Dana - many thanks, glad you enjoyed it@Stephen -...@Dana - many thanks, glad you enjoyed it<br>@Stephen - glad the sense of conflict made it through, it's always tough to get what we see in our heads out onto to the page in words<br>@2mara - thank you, glad I could make the reader anxious. As I mentioned above, I was hoping I could write something that wold connect. No worries about slacking, I can't get to read all the #fridayflash on Friday either.<br>KjMhttp://profile.typepad.com/kjmnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-46331475465064519942009-08-10T01:51:46.000-05:002009-08-10T01:51:46.000-05:00You did a great job and decribing her inner turmoi...You did a great job and decribing her inner turmoil... it made me incredibly anxious. This is very well written, I always enjoy reading your #fridayflash.<br>Sorry for being such a slacker; I am catching up<br>~2<br>2marahttp://www.2mara.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-3402103829210656212009-08-09T16:11:12.000-05:002009-08-09T16:11:12.000-05:00I like the double meaning of "caught in-betwe...I like the double meaning of "caught in-between". When the reader finally gets to the conclusion, this line makes sense. You did a fine job writing the conflicted soul with this one, Kevin. My hat is off to you.<br>Stephen Bookhttp://powderburnsandbullets.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-44623914429022782882009-08-09T15:01:16.000-05:002009-08-09T15:01:16.000-05:00Very lovely!Very lovely!<br>Danahttp://pixelenvy.canoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-25932405855138932412009-08-09T07:11:29.000-05:002009-08-09T07:11:29.000-05:00Thank you all - I was going for something that wou...Thank you all - I was going for something that would connect. I appreciate your reading it.<br>KjMhttp://profile.typepad.com/kjmnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-55510620913785943202009-08-08T19:07:11.000-05:002009-08-08T19:07:11.000-05:00The moment when she looks in the mirror is grippin...The moment when she looks in the mirror is gripping. Great description there. Very visual, showing us her state of mind rather than telling it.<br>danpowellhttp://danpowellfiction.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-91424574427962387592009-08-08T04:21:32.000-05:002009-08-08T04:21:32.000-05:00A beautifully written piece. Very emotional.A beautifully written piece. Very emotional.<br>Chris Chartrandhttp://www.thedarkeagle.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-57838674773880867882009-08-07T17:31:13.000-05:002009-08-07T17:31:13.000-05:00Very nice piece indeed, Kevin. Wrought both with l...Very nice piece indeed, Kevin. Wrought both with longing and regret. A real stir of emotions here.<br>~jon<br>J. M. Strotherhttp://www.jmstrother.com/tiki-view_blog.php?blogId=1noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23892967.post-56046988135338202982009-08-07T15:14:01.000-05:002009-08-07T15:14:01.000-05:00You evoke so much pain in this. The 'caught in...You evoke so much pain in this. The 'caught in-between' really says it all. So many of us are shadow-people, standing outside of society in one way or another. Beautiful piece, Kevin.<br>Laura Enohttp://lauraeno.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com