Thursday, April 03, 2014

C...is for weather(!)

Chill and misting
Cold breezes from the plains
Coat all in damp

The above feels a bit forced. Apologies. Tomorrow will(may) be better. 

Sent from my BlackBerry 10 smartphone.

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    1. Thanks, Susan. You're most welcome in this little cul-de-sac of the web where I play.

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  2. I think it's the last line that doesn't quite work - but then I'm not expert on haiku ^_^

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  3. I'm afraid you're correct, Helen. It really doesn't quite work. Nearly, but not good enough.

    Next time! :)

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  4. A little chilly for you? What happened to spring? :)

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