Wednesday, April 02, 2014

B - Beginnings

Beginnings 
Beneath cloud-patched skies
Budding life

The 3/5/3 form is harder than the usual 17 syllables, if you're trying to create something that might pass as a real haiku. 

Harder yet when you decide each line should begin with a specific letter. 

Enjoy the above. 

Sent from my BlackBerry 10 smartphone.

12 comments:

  1. Nicely done, Kevin! I like this one a lot!

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    1. Thank you, Janet. Glad you enjoyed it. I was pleased how it turned out.

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  2. Great one! I'll stick with the 5/7/5. More room to mess it up. ;)

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    1. I usually do, also. Stick with, I mean. Although, "mess it up" also applies often enough. :D

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  3. A good haiku is harder than it looks! Well done! Hope to see you again during the A to Z Challenge

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    1. So they are, Karen. Thanks for stopping by.

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  4. Good one for spring. Now to check out yesterday's.

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  5. You brave boy, you. Haiku restricted and refined.

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