Beginnings
Beneath cloud-patched skies
Budding life
The 3/5/3 form is harder than the usual 17 syllables, if you're trying to create something that might pass as a real haiku.
Harder yet when you decide each line should begin with a specific letter.
Enjoy the above.
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Nicely done, Kevin! I like this one a lot!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Janet. Glad you enjoyed it. I was pleased how it turned out.
DeleteExcellent! ^_^
ReplyDeleteHigh praise, Helen. Thank you.
DeleteGreat one! I'll stick with the 5/7/5. More room to mess it up. ;)
ReplyDeleteI usually do, also. Stick with, I mean. Although, "mess it up" also applies often enough. :D
DeleteA good haiku is harder than it looks! Well done! Hope to see you again during the A to Z Challenge
ReplyDeleteSo they are, Karen. Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteGood one for spring. Now to check out yesterday's.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Larry. Glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteYou brave boy, you. Haiku restricted and refined.
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